Sunday, 6 May 2012

Assignment 4 Tutor report

I've received my tutor's report on assignment 4.  Here's the whole report which is very gratifying as I put a lot of thought into the assignment.

Overall Comments
Assignment three focused on Monochrome, where you were asked to choose suitable colour images from a theme to convert to black and white format, bringing out qualities of form, tonal ranges of contrast and texture. You were also asked to express an account of why you chose a particular subject and comment on how you think you succeeded. This you successfully completed.

Assignment four has given you an opportunity to develop your creative thinking with design and manipulation techniques.


Feedback on assignment

You have produced a very clear brief for the project following an inspirational idea and carried out significant research of similar magazine covers that gave some background to your ideas.
Your documentation shows a step-by-step explanation of the creation of the magazine cover with clear instructions of your Photoshop techniques used in alteration and manipulation of the chosen image. You have further expanded your skills by adding text and colour that is quite striking and would I am sure attract teenagers looking for an interesting magazine with topical content.

Yellow, red and black are all contrasting colours and analysing the psychology of colours where red is the most emotionally intense colour, signifies danger and is also the colour of love. Red also is one of the most successful colours used by Manufacturers of food, drinks and cosmetics, etc. Yellow is known as cheerful and sunny. Black is authority and power and also implies submission. This then would suit the style and design you have chosen.

Your documentation clearly points out the stages of development of the final image with detailed changes in the text style, the added banner and carefully chosen alteration to the title of the banner that simply lifts the impact of the image. I think it is important that you have shown screen shots of the various manipulation stages in the assignment.

You clearly enjoyed working on this assignment and have produced a commendable product that you can be proud of. You explored the areas of adjustment and manipulation and honed in on your design skills in successfully applying this to the project in hand. To the untrained eye, the level of ethical justification to changes of the original image is very pleasing and would not necessarily cause offence to the model. Well-done Jennifer!


Sketchbooks/Learning Logs

Keeping sketchbooks and a learning log is an integral part of this and every other OCA course, not only because they constitute 20% of your marks if you choose to have your work formally assessed but they are also an excellent way to see how you are developing.


Your blog is great and fully up-to-date. Just check the numbering of the exercises, as I think you are a digit out (Alteration is Exercise 23 not 22)


Formal Assessment
As you are studying for the degree in Photography I am sure you plan to submit your work for assessment at the end of this course, from the work you have shown in your assignments, I suggest that you are very likely to be successful in the assessment.


Thursday, 26 April 2012

Assignment 4 Real or Fake magazine cover



Briefing
The purpose of this assignment is to demonstrate the potential for altering content and viewers’ perception in an image and help define your own stance.  The object is to produce a photographic image to illustrate an imaginary book or magazine cover.  Decide on a topic to be illustrated.  Explore the areas of adjustment and manipulation that would make the image successful as a cover.  Accompany the finished image with a description of the techniques you considered using and finally used and also your ethical justification.

>  Produce a photographic image to illustrate an imaginary book or magazine cover
>   Explore the areas of adjustment and manipulation that would make the image successful as a cover
>  Accompany the finished image with a description of the techniques you considered using and finally used and also your ethical justification
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Background
When I first read through this module I was excited to see the content of assignment 4, that of designing a book or magazine cover as the main part of the work.  I enjoy reading a great deal and at one point came across a book by the author Penelope Lively called ‘The Photograph’ where a man whose wife had recently died came upon an old envelope amongst a load of discarded items in a cupboard.  I thought the original cover was very weak and thought I could do better.  I tried to picture this cover in my head and even went so far as to source images to create a new cover but found it was outside my experience to do an adequate job so I searched round for an alternative.  Perhaps when I work through the level 2 digital photographic practice module I will be able to create my vision.

I remembered that I had taken some pictures for a teenage girl who wanted to break into modelling, even though she was on an IT course at my college, and I had been asked if I would take some pictures of her for her 'photo book'.  As I really enjoy the interaction with people and taking their portraits I agreed and spent a couple of hours in the studio with her.  I remembered the images I took of her and decided to design a teen models' magazine using one of those images

I did some research on the Internet to see what style of front covers women's /teens'/model magazines was used to sell them and came up with some front cover examples, see below.  I have done a fair amount of desk top publishing work both professionally and personal work in the past and have a good idea of what is needed to both create a good cover and be able to create an eye catching one. 



The front covers here gave me some new ideas to work with as I had been out of the design industry for some time.  I set out to do my best to create an eye-catching cover for a teen model magazine, that I called Teen Models.


What did you set out to achieve?
I wanted to create a front cover that would be eye-catching and that would create an impact on the bookstall to generate sales of the publication.

It was important not to just think of fonts and text size that anything would do.  I have been on several desk top publishing courses (DTP) whilst working in communications where part of my job was to design newsletters and magazines.  In the 1980s and 90s especially it was considered correct to have headings and sub-heading in a San-Serif font, ie, letters without curly bits such at Arial or Comic Sans, as this made the headings bold and attention grabbing.  Body or paragraph text would be written in a Serif text, i.e. with the curly bits on the letters, such as Times New Roman, to make it easier for the eye to follow the lines of text.  These days it seems like anything goes as per the magazine illustration below.  If you look at the fonts used you can see that the main heading 'COSMOPOLITAN' is all in block capitals and is a Sans Serif font.  Most of the other sub-headings are in Sans Serif but the black tilted sub-heading is in a Serif font, quite an ornate one from the design of the letter 'F' at the beginning of the first word.



My first task was to find that special image that would appeal to the teenage model demographic profile, so I searched through the pictures that I had taken of Fartuun.  The one that I thought would be most appealing was the one below.  Fartuun looked happy, relaxed and was smiling naturally.  There was space at the top of the image for the magazine title and around the sides for other information regarding inside articles.


 I removed the grey background so that I could add a new, more colour co-ordinated background and relevant text items.  I felt that a bright graduated background would be best so added a new layer to the image and made it graduated from white to yellow, as seen here. It turned out bright and cheerful and complimented Fartuun's dress, which made a good balance to the whole image.



Then I combined the two images into one TIFF file to see the effect but keep the layers separate whilst I worked on with my other ideas.



I liked the result especially at the lighter area of white came behind the girl's dark head and really emphasised it.  I inserted the title of the magazine 'Teen Models' using the Arial font size 72 as this was the largest available in the palette.  I enhanced it using the Layer Styles option adding a dropped shadow, inner shadow, outer glow, bevel and emboss and colour overlay.  Then I changed it to the Marker Felt font as I felt it had more impact.  Once I had the text looking the way I wanted it, I made it fit the width of the page by highlighting it and using the keyboard keys Command/Shift/right arrow to enlarge it to fit the space available.


 I wanted the model to be larger in the frame and her head in front of the title banner so I used the Transform tool to make her larger and re-ordered the Layers so that her layer was in front of the Title banner layer.


 As the model's hands had moved outside the cover area I had to resize the image to fit inside the width of the page.  I opened the Edit/Transform command T) and, holding down the Shift key to keep it in proportion, resized the model to show both her hands completely.  I also made her a bit taller by using the centre handle bar in the Transform box to pull the image down and did not hold the Shift key I was able to resize her but not keep the proportion.


 I had to decide which headings and subheadings would be shown to illustrate the main features in this magazine edition.  I chose to use the Cosmopolitan magazine front cover as an example, see next page, and liked the red circle sticker to emphasise a particular feature so set about constructing something similar for my publication.

I had to estimate the size of the circle so assumed it to be approximately 4 inches in diameter.  I used the elliptical marque tool, holding down the Shift key to keep it circular, and drew out the size I wanted and filled it with bright red colour.  I made another slightly larger circle, filled it with orange colour and placed it behind the red layer.   Below you can see the red circle layer, orange rim and white text layers.   I linked the two coloured layers so they stayed together when I repositioned them.  I added white text in an Arial font as it stood out well against the red background.  This time I used sentence case rather than all capitals as I thought it looked better.



I decided to copy the way the text was laid out so made a further layer of green text for emphasise then a separate layer of white text to go at the bottom of the circle.  I added the final pieces of text, following the colour ideas of the example magazine but substituted words that I thought were more appropriate to a teen model magazine.



I saved the image as a TIFF file in case I needed to make any changes then flattened it and saved it as a JPEG file to make it smaller.  I cropped it in closer and removed the white background by using the magic eraser tool.  Finally I dragged it into the main image as layer and positioned it to the lower right bottom area of the image.

I added further sub-headings to the image which I felt was appropriate for the publication and positioned them on the left hand side to balance up the whole page.



I felt the whole image needed more impact so added a banner across the centre of the page using a bright red colour and a Serif font.  I adjusted the size, as described earlier, to fit the area and used Transform to tilt it.



The final items the image needed were the date of the publication and a bar code so I added the date under the main title heading and a bar code/number in a black Sans Serif font, in the bottom right hand area in front of a white box.

Here's the finished image. 




To what extent do you feel you have succeeded?

I've really enjoyed this assignment as I was involved with newsletter and magazine design when I was in full-time employment.  I was a bit stuck for a subject but remembered my previous work and some of the pictures I had taken of Fartuun.  The fact that she wanted to break into modelling and would use my pictures as part of her 'Photo Book' gave me the idea of a teen models' magazine.

I used internet research on various magazine titles to see what was the modern style and based my ideas on the types of covers that I found.  I think the cover has impact and would stand out amongst all the other magazines of its type on a book stall.  I also think that it would attract the target audience with the subjects I used in the sub-headings and the way I designed them.

I'm really pleased with the finished result as I feel that I haven't lost my touch.  In the middle of working through this assignment I bought a new Apple iMac computer so had to reacquaint myself of all the different systems involved.  This proved difficult to start with but as I worked through the assignment I remembered more techniques and how to achieve them.


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Wednesday, 25 April 2012

Completed Assignment 4 - Real or Fake

I'm feeling really pleased with myself as I have completed this assignment well within the suggested time limit of mid-May.  The other good point is how much I've enjoyed this part of the module.  I've always enjoyed digital imaging having used Photoshop since edition 7, so to find a whole section dedicated to the subject was a real joy.  I went with the magazine front cover rather than the  book cover as I had too many problems to put the book illustration together.  Perhaps I'll have another go if there is a similar project in the advanced DPP module in Level 2.

Completed Front Cover
I've now only got section 5 to complete this module. I've got the go ahead from my tutor to carry on with my suggestion of reproducing some of the images of Lyme Regis (where I live) as digital art, which pleases me no end.

Just got to get the assignment 4 CD in the post to Norman and off I go with section 5.

Given myself a new challenge as I have just bought a fairly new iMac and got it up and running.  I used to have a Mac G4 system some years ago but decided to concentrate on PCs as that was what I taught to the local older generation where I lived before.  Now that I can please myself, I've gone back to the iMac and am working my way round all the different ways of working but enjoying every minute. I can't wait to get up in the morning and switch it on. The beauty of a mac is the instant response, no long wait for the machine to struggle its way to the start point. Great!

Sunday, 15 April 2012

Ready to start Assignment 4

Well, I've worked through all the exercises and enjoyed every one as this is a thing I really enjoy.  I've already got some ideas to put together for Assignment 4 and will be working through it over the next couple of weeks.

Tuesday, 10 April 2012

Change of direction

I've been trying to put together the images for The Photograph book cover and at present it seems a bit beyond my skills in Photoshop. There were so many elements which just didn't want to come together that I have abandoned it in favour of a magazine cover.

I have a portfolio of images of an Ethiopian girl who I featured in one of my exercises and want to use her again in this assignment.  So, I'll give it a go and let you know how I get on.

Wednesday, 21 March 2012

Thinking up ideas

I read this book called The Photograph which was about a man who'se wife had died and he was turning out her cupboards and he came upon an envelope with her handwriting on it saying 'do not open'.  Of course he opened it and found a picture of the back view of his wife, his wife's sister and her sister's husband.  The only problem was that his wife and wife's husband were holding hands behind her sister's back.  I felt the cover was not a good image reflecting the situation.

As I didn't have a suitable picture, I searched online and found one but it was a very modern image which would need a lot of manipulation.  I gave it a go, trawled up an old image of about the time but it all got too complicated to age it sufficiently so I have abandoned it in favour of another idea , this time of a magazine cover which seems slightly easier.

I really want to get up to date with this module as I have fallen behind quite a bit.  I should be almost finished if I had kept to the timetable, so trying really hard.  My tutor suggests mid-May for submitting assignment 4 and I should be able to submit it a bit sooner if I dedicate my time to it.